my essay test

i have written the essay on
 To what extent have science and technology solve the problem of the poor?

the link is as follows
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B_FR6Jkv0z2cMFVJcUVNVTlZSFk/edit?usp=sharing

kindly please comment about any suggestion or points i can include

one other essay by  RAKESH KUMAR on – Is privacy superior than security of citizens?, as I wont get time to write on Sunday
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B2JWowEdJwOBeTVGY2lzV1M1NTQ/edit?usp=sharing

by Yashpal Meena
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B6BFaHM1H0-MNXNSQU11RjdxaVU/edit?usp=sharing 

and 
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B50VcjUQgIP_WkJqSHhPTWtlTDg/edit?usp=sharing 
 

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